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Dive Into The Soul Of Storytelling With Deep Point Of View

What Is Deep Point of View And Why Should You Learn It?

Posted on September 22, 2017August 11, 2020 By Lisa Hall-Wilson

I LOVE Deep Point of View (POV). Back in the early 2000’s, I noticed some of the novels I was reading were written in a style that felt new and fresh. I was immersed into story in a way I hadn’t been before, and I was a little addicted to the thrill of the adventure of reading again.

That’s when I began exploring what this technique was and how to write it well. What was only known as limited or close third POV then, further evolved into what we now call Deep Point of View. Whether writing in first or third person, deep point of view made the characters real in a way I hadn’t experienced before.

So what is Deep Point of View?

Deep Point of View is a set of stylistic choices that limit the narrative to only what the point of view character knows, sees, hears, feels, experiences. Everything the readers knows about the point of view character, the other characters, the environment/world of the story, and what’s taking place is filtered through their inner world. The goal of deep point of view is to create an immersive reading experience. Deep Point of View avoids putting distance between the point of view character and the reader. This style of writing puts the reader IN the story so they CARE MORE because they’re experiencing the story alongside your point of view character in what feels like real time.

If you think of your point of view character as the driver of the story car, third person point of view would put the reader in the front passenger seat, or maybe in the backseat even, but deep point of view puts the reader in the driver’s lap. Readers don’t want to read your story  they want a story journey of their own. They want to feel the vibrations of the stick shift, feel the vehicle lurch and surge with each gear change, see everything the point of view character sees and know everything they know.

But that’s all the reader knows. Everything is filtered through the character experiencing or living out the story.

“You can think of it like this: every word in a deep POV is coming straight out of your character’s head. You’re trying to create the experience, for the readers, of actually being your narrating character.” K.M. Weiland (source here)

Deep Point of View is authentic and real, visceral, raw, and emotionally gripping. Readers are more interested in an experience (escape) that entertains, moreso than just being entertained. Deep Point of View spans across genres and can be done in third or first person POV.

Novels Written in Deep Point Of View:

The Help – Kathryn Stockett
The Hunger Games – Suzanne Collins
Divergent – Veronica Roth
Water For Elephants – Sara Gruen
Her Galahad – Melissa James
Paladin of Souls – Lois McMaster Bujold
Dreamlander – K.M. Weiland
Cry Wolf – Patricia Briggs
ROOM – Emma Donaghue
The Last Seers – Lisa Hall-Wilson
Cross My Heart – Pamela Cook
Cursed Wishes – Marcy Kennedy
Tough Road – Elizabeth Safleur
The Ladderman – Angela Archer
Because Of Dylan – Erica Alexander

There are also a lot of books that break a few rules of deep point of view, but are written in a visceral, immediate, and intimate style (maybe the still use a few distancing words or speech tags for instance) such as The Song Of Fire and Ice series (Game Of Thrones) by George R.R. Martin, The Silver Linings Playbook by Matthew Quick, Gone Girl by Gillian Flynn.

Head over to Amazon and search for an author or title and use the Look Inside feature to read the first few pages to see if it’s written in strict deep point of view or not. Don’t assume that because it’s first person it’s automatically written in deep point of view.

It’s also possible to use deep point of view as a technique reserved for moments of high emotion or tension, but otherwise write in a limited point of view the majority of the time.

What Does A Story Written Entirely in Deep Point of View Look Like?

You’re going to watch for any distance between the reader and the story that would be strictly avoided in Deep Point Of View:

Speech tags — He said, she said is avoided in Deep Point of View.

“Please pass the potatoes,” said Sarah. She took the dish passed to her. “Thanks.”

Instead, deep point of view uses beats (actions) to attribute speech: “Please pass the potatoes.” Sarah spread a napkin on her lap and reached for the dish being passed across the table. “Thanks.”

Distance Words — These are words that tip off the reader they’re outside the story instead of in it with the character telling the story. These are words that apply a filter, a pane of glass like a window, for the reader. Some distance words include: watched, saw, feel, wished, heard, thought, made, caused, hoped, knew, wondered, wanted, believed, regarded, noticed, looked, smelled, realized, decided, etc.

Dave watched the woman walk across the bar, heels clicking on the hard linoleum. In deep point of view this might look like: Dave twisted on the stool. A woman walked across the bar, heels clicking on the hard linoleum.

Steve felt his heart pound inside his chest like a fly on a window trying to escape. In deep point of view this might look like: Steve’s heart pounded inside his chest, thumping against his ribs like a fly against a window pane.

Narrator — Deep Point of View doesn’t use a narrator at all. Some contemporary examples of popular books that do use a narrator voice include A Series of Unfortunate Events by Lemony Snicket or I Am Number Four by Pitacus Lore.

Over the years of studying this technique and refining my own work, the scope of deep point of view runs so much deeper than just this brief overview. Deep Point Of View dictates character voice, demands showing over telling, and draws deeply upon the adage “write what you know.”

“Writing fiction with emotional effect requires feeling easy with uneasiness.” Donald Maass, The Emotional Craft of Fiction

Naming Emotions — Deep Point of View would rather present evidence, make a case for, a character’s emotion than tell a reader what emotion they’re experiencing. Instead of “He was nervous” in deep point of view a writer might explore his actions, his physiological response to being nervous, and will certainly capture the character’s thoughts on what’s leading him to feel nervous so the reader can draw their own conclusion. In Deep Point of View, the writer is the lawyer presenting evidence to the judge/reader on why the character is behaving, making decisions, feeling a certain way–it’s up to the reader to pronounce a verdict.

Want to know more?

Been told you should learn Deep Point Of View? Had an editor or critique partner tell you to “go deeper” with the emotions in your fiction? Looking for a community of writers seeking to create emotional connections with readers? Check out the Free Resource Hub and then join the Going Deeper With Emotions In Fiction Facebook group.

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    June 13, 2018 at 4:50 am

    Excellent. Interested in your courses.

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  16. Carla Simmons says:
    December 17, 2018 at 3:45 pm

    Thanks for the article on DPOV. This is a technique I enjoy reading and strive to emulate. I’d even forgotten about it for a while because it’s so hard to achieve. I must get back to practising it now that I’ve been reminded.

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  20. Wendy says:
    February 20, 2020 at 12:32 pm

    This sounds like “third-person limited.” When did it start to be “deep POV”? It’s funny, I’m minutes out of my monthly writers’ meeting, and we had a guest petitioning us to not put 1rst-graders in the same category as 4th-graders, which led to a lot of discussion about young writers. Another writer read a couple of works he’d done back in school, and I read a story I had started in 6th grade (MAYBE 7th), wondering if my juvenile word-smithing was worth using. The rest of the group though I must have been a writing prodigy if I’d done that in 6th grade. Yep, I’d call it “deep POV.” Even then (mid 1980’s), that was my natural writing style.

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  21. PJ Lightning says:
    December 14, 2020 at 3:52 pm

    I find the exact opposite is true: deep pov disconnects me from the characters because I’m left having to try to guess what they are feeling and descriptions of body language are insufficient to convey that.

    Reply
    1. Lisa Hall-Wilson says:
      December 14, 2020 at 3:57 pm

      Deep POV does require one to lean into the story and become invested – become the character living out the story. It’s more work for the reader.

      Reply
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  23. esme says:
    January 26, 2022 at 5:52 pm

    Oddly, this was the most common way to write a story in the early 80s when I graduated college. Today I believe it is more commonly called, Literary Fiction.

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    1. Lisa Hall-Wilson says:
      August 8, 2022 at 12:44 pm

      Deep POV was born out of the movement towards limited third person POV which began in the late 90s and early 00s.

      Reply
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  25. Karen ZE Wade says:
    April 19, 2022 at 1:40 pm

    Wow Lisa I’ve been writing for over three decades and read a lot of How-To stuff. You just get right to the heart of it. I feel I have improved through understanding since reading your words.

    Congratulations on being so inspirational!

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  26. Rahul Dubey says:
    May 20, 2022 at 10:20 am

    Wonderful post. Nice to read about what exactly deep point of view means.
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    1. Bee says:
      January 16, 2025 at 9:08 pm

      This is interesting! Is it kind of like rigidly applying “show don’t tell” to a 3rd person limited POV? Like instead of telling the reader “she felt nervous” I show what the nervousness does to her body and trust the reader to connect the dots?

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      1. Lisa Hall-Wilson says:
        January 16, 2025 at 9:42 pm

        There’s a bit more to it – but yes.

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  28. James Axsom says:
    July 23, 2024 at 11:59 pm

    My first encounter with DPOV was Marcy Kennedy’s Busy Writer Series. I read her Deep Point of View book over and over again then practiced. Since then Omniscient POV has been in the rear view mirror for me. Writing DPOV seriously improved my writing.

    Reply
    1. Lisa Hall-Wilson says:
      October 28, 2024 at 7:20 pm

      Marcy is a good friend. I’ll pass along your comment.

      Reply

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