Do beta readers keep saying, ‘I’m not in her head’ or, ‘this still feels distant,’? You’re not alone. This is by far the most difficult aspect of deep POV to put into practice. What if you learned how to transform character thoughts into forces of internal conflict that reveal personality,…
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Deep POV Mastery Series
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How To Write Compelling Raw Emotion In Deep POV
This is part of a continuing series on more advanced posts in the Deep POV Mastery Series. You’ve been writing for a while, so you already know the basics of deep point of view, but you’re still asking how to go deeper! Emotion is the glue that holds everything together,…
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Writing PTSD With Emotional Depth
Why Write About PTSD in Fiction?Trauma adds depth and emotional stakes to a character’s journey. When characters face overwhelming mental struggles, readers rally behind them. Including PTSD in a backstory risks cliché unless you portray emotional consequences beyond occasional memories. Updated July 2025 What Do Writers Get Wrong About PTSD?…
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How To Show Don’t Tell Backstory In Deep POV
Showing a character’s backstory in deep pov is tricky. It’s always easier to use the author voice to explain or summarize what’s already happened, why the character is acting or thinking a certain way, explain erratic behaviour, etc. and just move on with the story. Choosing deep point of view…
Deep Point Of View
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How to Remove Author Voice and Strengthen Deep POV (With Examples)
A character says or thinks — I don’t know what to do or She didn’t know what to think. Here’s some pro tips to eliminate author summary and master deep pov.
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Make The Most Of Sensory Detail In Deep POV
Using sensory details is something even new authors know they need to make the most of! With Deep point of view, your use of sensory details needs to level up. Using sensory details is one way to avoid cliché and pull your reader deeper into the story while being super…