fast draft

Are you stuck on an unending groundhog day cycle of editing the same book for years? I created this 5 layer editing system a year ago to be more efficient and effective with my edits and rewrites. Since I started using this system, I’ve written 3 books, rewritten one (for market and audience even though it won a national award), and am half done a fourth.

The problem with the unending edits is that a small change in the middle causes ripples that force you to go back to the beginning and start all over. By the time you get back to where you made that small change, you’ve made a dozen other small changes that force edits in the latter half of the novel and on and on it goes. You’re never finished. It’s exhausting, creatively numbing, unending, and eventually you give up to work on something more exciting.

Been there?

I won’t promise this process will fix all your editing woes, but it fixed a lot of mine. Feel free to adapt this system to make it work for you. I’d love to know the tweaks you added in the comments.

If you haven’t read part 1: Goals, make sure you do that. This foundation step is crucial. If you skip this, none of these other steps will help you. If you don’t have a first draft or are struggling to complete one, this post on fast drafting might help.

Prep Work: Goals
Layer 1: Plot (you are here)
Layer 2: Scenes and Sequels
Layer 3: (Weakness) Plus Characterization
Layer 4: Emotions
Layer 5: Consistency

Where Do You Start?

First, let’s review the work we’ve already done. You’ve got your first draft done and you’ve identified story goals, character goals, and the emotional arc. Keep those three things in your back pocket with this layer. Plot is a big picture review of your story. As you read through the manuscript on this pass, resist the urge to correct word choices, punctuation, or small details. We’ll get to those. If you start doing that you’ll get distracted or bogged down. Stop!

These foundation pieces can’t move once you’ve corrected any problems, so knowing what kind of story you want to tell is imperative (story goal, character goal, emotional arc). If you play around with one of these foundation pieces in later steps, you’ll have to go back to this beginning layer and start over 🙁

Now, if you’re a plotter not a pantser, you may have already done this work before you started your first draft. You can probably get through this step quickly as confirmation of what you’ve already worked on.

Start With A Final Word Count

What’s your final word count? For the sake of example, let’s say you have a 63,000 word manuscript. Divide that into quarters: 25%, 50%, and 75%. Determine what the page numbers should be to roughly correspond to those word counts.

So, a 63,000 word mss is roughly 170 pages (Times New Roman, 12pt, double spaced). 25% would be roughly page 42ish, 50% would be page 84ish, 75% would be page 126 roughly.

Scroll to those places in your manuscript. Where are you in the story — what’s taking place? These percentage points correspond with where major plot events should take place (I give myself a ten page leeway on either side of that page number). Write it down on a notepad. Plot out your story. What’s happening at those markers. Are those the corresponding plot events?

What To Look For: Inciting Incident

The inciting incident (the ‘inc inc’ as Les Edgerton calls it) should happen right near the beginning of the story. Some say it should begin on page 1, I’m not that dogmatic about it. I’ve seen the inciting incident happen successfully on page 1 and sometimes at the 5% or 10% mark. I do think genre dictates how soon the inc inc has to happen, but not everyone agrees with me. This is the character goal from our foundation step. What does your protagonist want/want to accomplish/attain most? What is it they will spend the book trying to achieve?

In The Lord of the Rings, Frodo’s story goal is to destroy the one ring. He’s convinced that is the answer to his story problem from beginning to end. The inc inc has to create the problem that’s led to this solution being the story problem. You may find you’ve started too soon or too late. The inc inc must be compelling, feel insurmountable, and definable. It’s possible to have an improper inc inc and still have a solid story, but you may have to rewrite a few things to make everything solid. You can’t skip this.

What To Look For: Point Of No Return

At the 25% mark is the point of no return. What happens in the story that forces the protagonist to keep going forward – there’s no going back to the world they knew before the inc inc at this point. The obstacle faced at the point of no return must be a result of choices the protagonist has made.

Why? This is a discussion of reactive vs proactive characters. I’m a visual learner, so when I work through this layer I picture Buffy (Buffy the Vampire Slayer) vs Bella (Twlight).

Something happens at the beginning of every episode to Buffy–an inc inc, but after that Buffy DIRECTS the story (she’s proactive) by the choices she makes. Stuff happens TO Bella (she’s reactive) and she is constantly behind the 8-ball. Here’s where your story goal comes in. What kind of story do you want to write? Is your writing good enough for readers to cheer for a character who’s reactive? The general rule is write fiction protagonists who are proactive because they’re more interesting to read about and cheer for.

What To Look For: The Mirror Moment

At 50%, look for the mirror moment. This is what James Scott Bell describes as the emotional heart of a story. It’s the point in the story where the protagonist looks into a proverbial mirror and realizes they have to change. They must shed fears and flaws–toughen up.

“It’s about the Lead character, taking a long, hard look at himself (as in a mirror). He asks, Who am I? What have I become? Who am I supposed to be?…or the mirror moment is when the character realizes that the odds are so great he’s probably going to die.” James Scott Bell

What’s happened in the story that’s forced the protagonist to look within themselves and decide they have to change? This won’t be a whole scene, it should be just a couple of sentences. It’s imperative that it happen and that it happen roughly at the middle. This is another plot point that’s easy to miss.

If you find this is missing, that’s OK. Likely the emotional mid-point is already in the story, you just need to have the character look inward for a moment (no navel gazing) and decide what’s got to change. This doesn’t have to be outwardly stated, feel free to use some *cough* art *cough* but don’t be too obscure either. At the beta reader stage, you can easily determine if this is clear or not and fix it accordingly.

What if there’s too much/not enough space between the point of no return and the mirror moment? Ah – this is the very reason we’re working through this layer. If these plot points happen too close together, I’ve often found my inc inc is wrong most of the time. If there’s too much space, you have to cut the scenes that aren’t moving the story forward. Be ruthless. Does EVERY scene see the protagonist being proactive and moving the story forward? If not, it’s gotta go. Use the character goal and emotional arc as a guide for what stays and what goes.

What To Look For: The Major Setback (All Is Lost)

At the 75% mark, you’re looking to make sure the major setback happens. This isn’t the final climax, that happens later, but the major setback is a devastating setback or failure. This setback all but destroys the protagonist. In a romance, this is where the hero’s deception is revealed and the lovers break up. This is when Frodo wakes up to find he’s been captured by the enemy and lost the ring. It’s when Aragorn meets with Sauron’s mouthpiece outside the Black Gates and believes Frodo’s been killed and the ring lost. Right – this is BLEAK!

With the all is lost moment, the protagonist must choose an all or nothing push. It’s do or die at this point. This isn’t the big climax, but it’s what compels the protagonist that big bad conflict is not only necessary but is essential to survival.

Remember, if there’s too much space between the mirror moment and the major setback you’ll have to be ruthless and cut some out. At this point, if you have to cut scenes that you’re certain are required you might look at increasing the length of your story. Length is often a marketing decision though, so make sure you’ve done some research on your genre and what’s standard. You’ll have a hard time selling a 100,000 word romance novel, for instance.

When I’ve faced this problem I’ve had to face the reality that I need to simplify my plot. There’s too much going on. Really get down to the bones of the story and the character goal — you may be able to eliminate scenes by tossing a minor subplot without sacrificing the main story you want to tell. (Painful — ask me how I know :/ Better to find out at this stage than after you’ve done all the work of cleaning it up, getting covers, etc.)

What To Look For: The Climax (Final Push)

In the final quarter, where does the climax happen? Is it bigger and worse for the protagonist than the major setback? Are the odds of success totally against them? Will the reader lean forward in their chair trying to figure out how the protagonist is going to pull this off and cheer for them to go for it? That’s what you’re looking for. This conflict must end with the protagonist getting almost everything they wanted (remember the character goal), but also delivers a loss (emotional arc). This was addressed in more detail in part 1.

Frodo does end up destroying the ring, but he’s so broken emotionally and physically he has to leave Middle Earth. It’s a win and a big loss.

Study Your Plot Notes

You’ve done the hard objective work of analyzing what’s happening and when. Hopefully you’ve confirmed you have a solid foundation for a story or where you need to tighten things up. First drafts are supposed to be fugly, so don’t throw in the towel if you discover your story is broken. At this stage, taking the time to rearrange blocks and rewrite a few others will save you hours and hours of work later.

The key to this process is to be objective and ruthless. Look at each plot point and be sure what the protagonist is thinking and feeling at each stage. Is each new plot point the result of an action they have taken to solve their story problem? Do the plot points happen at roughly the right point in the manuscript?

Once you’ve analyzed what you’ve found, go ahead and make the necessary repairs. Remember, don’t focus on description or word choice or punctuation or any of that. If you can be laser focused, you’ll be able to work efficiently and get through this fairly fast depending on how many repairs are required.

If you’re not sure or don’t have the experience to know if you’ve got things right, share your results with your writer’s group or ask a more experienced writer. Get some honest feedback.

Been told you should learn Deep Point Of View? Had an editor or critique partner tell you to “go deeper” with the emotions in your fiction? Looking for a community of writers seeking to create emotional connections with readers? Check out the Free Resource Hub and then join the Going Deeper With Emotions In Fiction Facebook group.

Fast Drafting is a concept I first heard about from author Candace Havens. I have never taken her workshops, but I gleaned the concept from a handful of blog posts and ran with it. Jami Gold summarizes this writing technique: “Fast drafting entails getting the framework of our stories down as fast as possible—without worrying what that draft looks like.” (Read Jami’s post here.)

I have always been a S L O W writer and a dedicated pantser, but I was frustrated with the relentless editing pantsing requires. It was always one step forward two steps back. I was getting nowhere. So, I tried fast drafting. WOW! Totally changed things. In order to fast draft, I needed a skeletal outline and everything has fallen into place for me.

My preference now is to disappear for a weekend and pound out 20,000 – 25,000 words in 2.5 days. So, fast drafting is just that. You don’t stop and edit what you wrote the day before. You don’t stop to create a timeline or do research or check a thesaurus. You just write.

Isn’t this really what NanoWriMo is? Fast drafting? I mean, to make a word count of 50,000 words in a month you have to write 1,667 words a day. Most professional writers are setting themselves 2500 word counts per day, but for a month you can get kind of the idea of what it takes to write full time.

But what if you get stuck?

You’ve committed to doing NaNo, you’ve signed up and joined a camp/tribe for the encouragement and accountability. You started well…

And now you have this dedicated time to sit and stare at a blinking cursor. :/

Four Tips To Overcome Writer’s Block

When I find myself staring at a blank screen, it’s often the result of one of three main problems. I may only be struggling with one or two or all three at any given time.

Fear

What if this sucks? What if no one wants to read it? What if this entire idea is stupid? What if I embarass myself or my family with this? Fear creeps in through a variety of lies, and when the writing gets hard it’s easier to believe the lies and blame writer’s block than admit you’re scared and push through it.

I can only share how I push through this. First, acknowledge that the first draft is just for you. No one else gets to see the first draft. It might be terrible, but it’s a skeleton. It’s not supposed to be pretty or eloquent. A first draft has a purpose and it’s to get the bones of the story down. Second, when it comes to writing (unless you’re outting someone or admitting to a crime, plagiarizing — something of that nature) the only thing you have to fear is fear itself. You’re at the keyboard pounding out the story where dozens of others only SAY they want to write and never have the chutzpah to actually do it. Give yourself credit.

Third, often in my experience, two-thirds of fear is simple perfectionism. Admit that you’re not perfect. Say it out loud in front of a mirror if you have to. Your story will never be perfect either. You do your best and ship, and promise to make the next project better. AND YOU MOVE ON. This doesn’t mean you don’t get beta readers, pay for editors and proof readers and all that jazz, you create the most professional product you can, and you move on.

Lack Of Planning

Yes, this dedicated pantser is admitting that a lack of planning is a problem. Using a visual planner has completely changed my writing! I took the visual planner offered as a free PDF (from Writing Helping Writers) and tweaked it a bit (I incorporated different language here and there, added some teaching from James Scott Bell) and then created a blank version I can print off and write on. As long as I can jot a line in each of these boxes, I can fast draft like a beaver through aspen.

I found that a good part of the time I sit staring at a screen it’s because I don’t know where the story needs to go. This helps that quite a lot.

Procrastination

Ooooh – does this hit home for you too? Writing is hard. It requires that you dig deep into emotions you’d rather not dredge up. It requires going to places the story dictates even if it makes you uncomfortable sometimes. It requires stepping back from the story and being objective about aspects that you really really love and desperately want to keep but need to go. It means showing your work to people and getting feedback — even harsh feedback. It might mean starting over or rewriting portions.

Get Moving

This is pretty big for me. Sometimes I just need to change rooms or locations and that helps jog the creativity. Sometimes just moving for a minute helps. I’ll put on a load of laundry or wash a sink-full of dishes. I also try and do some kind of exercise every day – whether it’s a long walk, weight training — whatever.

So, I hope the tips that help me might help unstick you too! Remember, head down – dive deep!

What helps you get your creativity moving again?

Editing In Layers Part 2: Plot