Showing a character’s backstory in deep pov is tricky. It’s always easier to use the author voice to explain or summarize what’s already happened, why the character is acting or thinking a certain way, explain erratic behaviour, etc. and just move on with the story. Choosing deep point of view…
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Unleash The Power Of Deep POV: Pro Tips To Remove Author Summary With Examples
A character says or thinks — I don’t know what to do or She didn’t know what to think. Here’s some pro tips to eliminate author summary and master deep pov.
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Making The Most Of Sensory Detail In Deep POV
Using sensory details is something even new authors know they need to make the most of! With Deep point of view, your use of sensory details needs to level up. Using sensory details is one way to avoid cliché and pull your reader deeper into the story while being super…
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4 Tips For Rewriting In Deep Point Of View With Examples
You asked for it! Let’s dive into some examples so you can see a deep point of view rewrite in action! From time to time I ask my audience what kind of content would help them learn best, and every single time I get the same answer: examples. I dove…
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Mastering Character Description Without Info Dumps In Deep POV
How to fix info dumps in character description using deep POV.
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5 Tips To Show Time Passing In Deep Point Of View
5 tips on how to show the passage of time in a story without using author intrusion or telling and staying in deep point of view.